How rain is made.
May 31 2021
Made by Pippa.B
How is rain made? Have you ever asked yourself that? First, what is rain? Rain is water that people drink to make themselves hydrated. Water is something that a human body needs to live. Clouds produce the rain. Clouds soak up the moisture from earth to make it rain. In winter the ground is more moist so there is more rain and in summer it is more dry than moist.
Snow is made the same way but different. Snow is made the same but before it drops to the ground it freezers to make snow. If you are not lucky it will hail. Hail is little pieces of snow and Ice hail is hard and it hurts so stay away if you can.
My writing goal is to use time connectives.
pippa your writing is great but you need to add paragraphs in your writing.
ReplyDeleteHi Pippa your writing is great but you might want to go back and put some paragraphs.
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pippa i think that your writing is great.you have differently achieve your goal I just think you need to add a bit more because your story is a little short great idea on adding a picture by the way good job
ReplyDeleteI like how you side that snown is mad the same
ReplyDeletehi daisy. I think I might have a little feed back for you to. thankyou for producing such a positive comment. maby you need to work on your spelling a little more:)
DeleteHi Pippa.When I was reading your text I have enjoyed learning about rain.It was a very interesting topic and you have added alot of detailed to some of the sentences you have added to your writing.And I think when you added a picture it made your writing look really really good. But I agree with Ruby and I think that you should add a little bit more to your writing. Anais
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